Love the plot twist! And the dialogue when George is undercover is great :)
LOL! Verry cleveer twist. I wonder if Oliva later on gets turned into him?. any very charming story
very cute!
Love the direction of the story!
Great part 2! I love how you used the comments from part 1 and wove them into this story. Well done.
Love the plot twist! And the dialogue when George is undercover is great :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Verry cleveer twist. I wonder if Oliva later on gets turned into him?. any very charming story
ReplyDeletevery cute!
ReplyDeleteLove the direction of the story!
ReplyDeleteGreat part 2! I love how you used the comments from part 1 and wove them into this story. Well done.
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